Showing posts with label persuasive. Show all posts
Showing posts with label persuasive. Show all posts

Friday, November 21, 2014

Another Turkey is Saved!

Save the Turkeys
         
          Would you believe that everyone is eating something other than turkey this Thanksgiving?  You don’t want to have turkey this Thanksgiving.  Turkey takes too long to prepare, makes you sleepy, and is not good.  Make the smart choice this holiday like everyone else. 
          First turkey takes too long to prepare.  It needs to thaw for 24 hours.  Once that big ol’ bird isn’t frozen you will still need to bake it for hours.  A good turkey requires basting, too.  All these steps sound like way too much work for a meal,
          Then it makes you sleepy. You sometimes you get too full when you eat that white meat. The chemical called L-tryptophan in turkey really does cause this tired feeling. So make a good choice this time.
          Last of all it’s not that good. Sometimes it can be so dry.  Also other times the turkey can get burnt.

          As  you  see,  you  don’t  want  to  have  turkey  this Thanksgiving   because it’s  going  to  take too long  to prepare, it  makes  you  sleepy, and  it’s  not good. Every family wants to enjoy their holiday.  You  do  not  want  turkey  this  Thanksgiving.

Thursday, November 20, 2014

How Many Turkeys Will You Save?

We've been working with persuasive writing.  We talked about 8 different persuasive techniques.

Here is one of our final projects:



HAM IS BETTER THAN TURKEY !
Do you really want Turkey for Thanksgiving?  Let me change your mind.   Ham is better than turkey.  Turkeys carry diseases.  Turkeys may have eaten things other than what’s good for us.
First off ham is way healthier than turkey.  Ham has a better taste.  If you are looking for a moist and tasty meat, then ham is the answer.  This year switch your meal to ham.
Also turkeys will make you sick! They still have their poop inside when they are cooked.  The sweet smell of baking turkey can be the disease that is growing in the intestines of that bird you are baking. 
Do you know where it’s been? Turkey’s could’ve eaten spiders or other bugs. They have a chemical that goes to your brain.  After you eat turkey you want to watch football instead of sleep right?
Anyway I’m saying don’t eat turkey this Thanksgiving. plz plz plz do not eat Turkey for Thanksgiving.